Yay! Glad you were able to finish this in time. It came out pretty well, too, especially considering you were pressed for time.

I like all the technobabble you used with Kel's suit and situation and stuff. It was really well written, and sounded believable enough. I understood it the whole way through, which is awesome because sometimes authors can get carried away with making it sound technological and it's not clear enough for the reader to understand wtf is going on. I did, though, so kudos.

I like Kel's character. I also like how you started with him doing his own missiony stuff in his world (I did that too hurdur so I can appreciate someone else using the idea. It gives the reader and potential opponents a better look into how Kel would function under a stressful situation, and helps us relate to him better.) and the whole bit with the Superego. Very creative. I liked it.

A couple of things: Watch how you format your dialogue. "You do a lot of this." He said. "When it should be like this," he said. Also, in the section where you're talking to your Superego, you don't use dialogue tags at all. For the most part I was able to tell who was talking, but just a couple tags would have been helpful. Even just a "Andrew said" once or twice would have cleared it up.

I'm not too sure I understand the ending, either, but I trust that you know where you're going with it. Overall, solid work.